# Quality review — Rotanı Seç #001

## Stage A — build review

The six first-pass PNGs were inspected together at 360×450 and individually at 1080×1350. The sequence already had strong compositional variety, but supporting copy on slides 03–06 was too small at phone scale. Secondary copy sizes were increased; slide 01 subtitle contrast and slides 02/03 list rhythm were strengthened. No copy was removed or rewritten.

## Stage B — final creative review

- **01 Hook:** asymmetric diagonal collision reads instantly; Tokyo cyan and Seoul acid/pink remain distinct without flags. The title owns the frame; documentary night photography retains atmosphere.
- **02 Life after class:** the contact-sheet rhythm places Waseda, Sinchon, rail and metro in one afternoon narrative. Labels remain readable over the coloured notes.
- **03 Universities:** six real campuses are identifiable without six repetitive cards. Lists are dominant enough to prevent the collage from becoming decorative.
- **04 Language:** English/local-language tension is the sequence's most experimental composition. Japanese `日常` and Korean `일상` both mean “daily life”; they are decorative and accurate.
- **05 Budget:** the four bespoke line icons carry meaning and scan quickly. No unsupported figures or cheaper-city conclusion is introduced.
- **06 Decision:** city choice is visually immediate, comment CTA is dominant, consultation is secondary, and the H-02 signature closes the sequence without a corporate card ending.

## Scoring after revision

| Category | Score | Evidence |
|---|---:|---|
| Hierarchy | 9/10 | Every slide has one dominant entry point; the finale's interaction CTA is visually stronger than consultation copy. |
| Consistency | 9/10 | Jost, three approved anchors, city accents and disciplined editorial labels create continuity without repeated templates. |
| Aesthetics | 9/10 | Documentary crops, angled cuts, contact sheets and controlled colour create magazine energy rather than brochure styling. |
| Usability | 9/10 | Exact-copy, font load, bounds, collisions and lockup separation pass mechanically; 375×469 previews were inspected. |

The first final inspection also caught a High contrast issue: dark-field lockups had been placed on paper and the light-field lockup on the dark finale. All signatures were replaced with the contrast-appropriate complete canonical variants (`D-04/light`, `H-02/dark`) and the six outputs were rerendered and re-inspected.

No Critical or High issue remains. Medium residual: dense supporting copy on slides 04–05 requires attentive reading, but is legible at mobile preview size and cannot be shortened under the content contract.

## Acceptance record

- [x] Exactly six slides
- [x] Exact content contract mechanically preserved
- [x] Canonical lockups verified and unmodified
- [x] Six visibly distinct compositions
- [x] Licensed, source-recorded photography
- [x] Meaningful bespoke vector icons
- [x] No overlap, clipping or truncated university names
- [x] No partnership claim or invented cost figure
- [x] Full-size and 375 px outputs visually inspected
- [x] Strong hook and comment-led closing CTA

Human campaign approval and social-publication permission remain pending.